Subject: Depression Date: Wed, 4 Oct 1995 13:52:30 +0000
DEAR MIKE, CAM AND RICHARD...
The essay you wrote was well-written and easy to understand. It seems that you have a lot of knowledge about the topic. We liked how you explained socialism in the former Soviet Union and how it relates to the depression in the U.S.A. You explained the New Deal thoroughly. However, we feel you could have used more sources. You could have explained socialism more and how it pertains to the U.S.A. We thought you should have restated your question in the conclusion. Instead you wrote a new question.