From: "Tara Miller, Tricia Quigley,Keely Wolter"
Subject: World War 2 essay
Date: Wed, 4 Oct 1995 13:58:29 +0000

HI Jason, Jakey, & Doug! We are here to critique your essay on World War 2. 
First of all we want to tell you we thoroughly enjoyed your essay. You did a 
very good job backing your opinions with facts. The third paragraph was very 
well written.  We thought that you put in alot dates and that really helped to 
put the situation into perspective.  We felt the third paragraph had many strong
pionts that could be carried on in the rest of the paper.  We thought that you 
could have used more of your own opinions, we found the second paragraph hard to
follow.  You needed a better topic senence and better explainations in the 
second paragraph.  We really did enjoy your essay, we laughed, we cried, we 
lied! Just joking.

Sincerley- 3 chicas from Minnesota ! 
Tara Miller
Keely Wolter
Tricia Quigley

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