From: "Kristin Willi"
To: email@example.com Subject: critiques Date: Wed, 4 Oct 1995 14:05:28 +0000 Civil War- We thought it was a very well-written essay. The group doesn't compare the South's generals to the North's general. The facts about the South's generals were detailed, but unbalanced. There was more written on the southern generals than the northern generals. Several of the South's general went to West Point (according to the essay), which is located in New York. New York was on the North's side during the Civil War so that is kind of pointing to the fact that the North had better training school. Both sides of the war had good battle tactics, because the war went on for several years. In the end, the North's generals finally won the long, bloody Civil War. Showing that the North had an extremely good army, better than that of the South. If the south had had won the war, the generals of South would have been heroes to the people of the new country. Since they didn't, the South's generals were not as well-noted as the winning North. This note was written by Kristin Willi, Melinda Schmick, David Madison, T.J. Brown, and Heather Peterson at Champlin Park High School.